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Acing the Application Essay
Step One: Brainstorming
The most important part of your essay is the
subject matter. You should expect to devote about 1-2 weeks simply
to brainstorming ideas. To begin brainstorming a subject idea
consider the following points. From brainstorming, you may find
a subject you had not considered at first.
- What are your major accomplishments, and why do you consider them
accomplishments? Do not limit yourself to accomplishments you have been
formally recognized for since the most interesting essays often are
based on accomplishments that may have been trite at the time but become
crucial when placed in the context of your life.
- Does any attribute, quality, or skill distinguish you from everyone
else? How did you develop this attribute?
- Consider your favorite books, movies, works of art, etc. Have these
influenced your life in a meaningful way? Why are they your favorites?
- What was the most difficult time in your life, and why? How did your
perspective on life change as a result of the difficulty?
- Have you ever struggled mightily for something and succeeded? What
made you successful?
- Have you ever struggled mightily for something and failed? How did
you respond?
- Of everything in the world, what would you most like to be doing right
now? Where would you most like to be? Who, of everyone living and dead,
would you most like to be with? These questions should help you realize
what you love most.
- Have you experienced a moment of epiphany, as if your eyes were opened
to something you were previously blind to?
- What is your strongest, most unwavering personality trait? Do you
maintain strong beliefs or adhere to a philosophy? How would your friends
characterize you? What would they write about if they were writing your
admissions essay for you?
- What have you done outside of the classroom that demonstrates qualities
sought after by universities? Of these, which means the most to you?
- What are your most important extracurricular or community activities?
What made you join these activities? What made you continue to contribute
to them?
- What are your dreams of the future? When you look back on your life
in thirty years, what would it take for you to consider your life successful?
What people, things, and accomplishments do you need? How does this
particular university fit into your plans for the future?
If these questions cannot cure your writer's block, consider the following
exercises:
1. Ask for Help from Parents, Friends, Colleagues, etc.
If you cannot characterize yourself and your personality traits do not
automatically leap to mind, ask your friends to write a list of your
five most salient personality traits. Ask your friends why they chose
the ones they did. If an image of your personality begins to emerge,
consider life experiences that could illustrate the particular traits.
2. Consider your Childhood
While admissions officers are not interested in reading about your
childhood and are more interested in the last 2-4 years of your life,
you might consider events of your childhood that inspired the interests
you have today. Interests that began in childhood may be the most
defining parts of your life, even if you recently lost interest. For
instance, if you were interested in math since an early age and now
want to study medicine, you might incorporate this into your medical
school admissions essay. Analyze the reasons for your interests and
how they were shaped from your upbringing.
3. Consider your Role Models
Many applicants do not have role models and were never greatly influenced
by just one or two people. However, for those of you who have role
models and actually aspire to become like certain people, you may
want to incorporate a discussion of that person and the traits you
admired into your application essay.
4. Read Sample Admissions Essays
Before you sat down to write a poem, you would certainly read past
poets. Before writing a book of philosophy, you would consider past
philosophers. In the same way, we recommend reading sample admissions
essays to understand what topics other applicants chose. You can find
a wide variety of sample essays at EssayEdge
Life is short. Why do you want spend 2-6 years of your life at a particular
college, graduate school, or professional school? How is the degree
necessary to the fulfillment of your goals? When considering goals,
think broadly. Few people would be satisfied with just a career. How
else will your education fit your needs and lead you to a fulfilling
life?
If after reading this entire page you do not have an idea for your
essay, do not be surprised. Coming up with an idea is difficult and
requires time. Actually consider the questions and exercises above.
Without a topic you feel passionate about, without one that brings out
the defining aspects of you personality, you risk falling into the trap
of sounding like the 90 percent of applicants who will write boring
admissions essays. The only way to write a unique essay is to have experiences
that support whatever topic you come up with. Whatever you do, don't
let the essay stress you out. Have fun with the brainstorming process.
You might discover something about yourself you never consciously realized.
Good Luck!
Next: Selecting an Essay Topic.
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